phys calc isn't really necessary with the beam power calc on MPS operator, worth a mention and probably easier to use for newer operator
Also the importance of double checking Energy and Stripping eff especially would be a good tip
note that cw is 100hz, 9950us
wouldn't include cavitiy monitoring, AP normally asks for this and immediately wants it done so it can be done in the moment without any surprise, also this opens the can of worms on how to accomplish this without explaining it
You don't calculate anything in the Diag page, do you mean 5521 and Scott's tool?
DCCTs are only for going past the target, generally I'd leave that as a separate section as you otherwise need to get into the weeds with checking the ARIS post etc.
I'd probably do inhibit modes earlier, not a huge issue but similar to prev notes it's a bigger issue that I think could use more detail
Links
Limiting Primary Beam Power → This operator page has a lot of important information about the devices involved and how they work